Saturday, December 4, 2010
Presentation
I hope the presentation went well. I am trying to make this paper the best I can. The problem that I am having is avoiding a autobiography as I write my paper. In my presentation I did my best to example the goals of my paper and avoid just telling you guys about my dad. I wont this paper to have some of myself involved in it and why I see my father as a role model and more importantly how he reflects in me. I have so much I would like to include and it is very hard to tie it to thesis statement so I really appreciate the advice during my presentation.
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I think as long as you keep your thesis pretty basic, you should be alright, because then you're free to talk about the business and sports side of him. If you include business or sports directly in your thesis, then your whole paper is supposed to center on that, so it'd probably be more difficult. But I enjoyed your presentation and I hope everything works out well for you!
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